Amazing as always.
It just so happens that I have that same make/model microphone, but let's not kid ourselves.
Effectswise, you got the fearsome vocoder effect that you were aiming for. Not overdone, nor does your real voice peak through. I can definitely see this used someday. The acting is also worth noting because it's well-done for someone not known for voice acting. Maybe I could cast you in one of my projects... Oh, and the recording quality is also great.
The Good:
-Original
-Well-recorded
-Great effects
-Nice acting
The Bad:
-Nothing really
Overall: Another ten from me, and when is your forum going to be online?